1. Paper fails to flow smoothly, not written in sentences easy for normal readers to understand. 2. Frequently discuss information not relating to the topic and fails to explain the topic at hand. 3. Multiple grammatical errors and poor sentence structure for a "PLATINUM" writer. 4. Resource used but the paragraph is not written by the writer's own word with a citation but instead copy & paste from the article/literature itself. 5. x3 revision completed by the writer but does not meet my requirement and not satisfied with the material as overall fails to discuss the topic. 6. Failed to meet the deadline.